01 What happened on this callFirst read
A technically clean demo that sold to one person in a two-person decision. The air-quality hook landed early and the dirt reveal drew a real reaction from Dan — audible surprise at 19:42. From there the rep carried the call alone: a six-and-a-half minute stretch with no question in it, then value, then price. Maria engaged for the first twenty minutes, then went quiet at 22:10 and never spoke again — including through the entire price presentation and the close. The single close attempt came three minutes after price, and the rep answered his own pause after 1.2 seconds. "We need to think about it" arrived at 43:05, was met with a feature restatement rather than a framework, and returned at 45:40 as the close of the call. The names ask never happened.
- Rep talk time 71% — above the pack band for an in-home demo, and it climbs, not falls, after price.
- 14 questions asked, 4 of them open. Discovery was fact-gathering, not motive-finding.
- One question in the whole call was directed at Maria (7:15). Eleven were open to the room, which Dan answered.
- 8 of 9 demo beats hit. The missed beat is the referral / names ask.
- Reaction peak at 19:42 (dirt reveal) was not converted into a trial close.
- Price at 38:20 followed 6:10 of uninterrupted feature talk.
- 1.2 seconds of silence after the close attempt. Band for this trade: 4 seconds or more.
- "Too expensive" at 43:05 handled with features; recurred at 45:40 unresolved.
- No dated next step captured at the end of the call.
- Score trend is up: 54 → 68 across the rep's last six uploaded demos.
02 Talk ratio over timeFull report
Share of speech per four-minute block. The bar to watch is not the average — it's whether the rep's share falls as the call moves toward the decision. Here it rises.
03 Question cadenceFull report
Every question in the call, bucketed by minute. Two flat stretches: 12–16 (the pan setup) and 32–36 (the feature run-up to price).
04 Open vs closed questionsFull report
Closed questions harvest facts. Open questions surface motive. A price objection at minute 43 is usually a discovery failure at minute 8.
05 Who each question was aimed atFull report
The in-home version of cold-call vs volunteer. A question thrown at the room gets answered by whoever is most comfortable talking — which is rarely the one who decides.
06 Second decision-maker engagement CriticalFull report
Both decision-makers were in the room, which is the rule. This measures the part the rule can't: whether both were in the conversation. Each mark is a turn taken.
07 Beat coverageFirst read 8 / 9
The pack's expected arc for an in-home demo, in order, with the minute each one landed.
08 The close, second by secondFirst read
The most coachable two seconds in selling: what the rep does with the pause after asking for the order.
09 Your coach noteFull report
You ran a clean demonstration, and the reveal at 19:42 got the reaction every rep is working for — Dan actually said "you're kidding me." That is the moment the call was won, and it went by without a trial close. Everything the report flags after it comes from the same root: from minute 12 onward, you were performing the demo instead of running a conversation, and Maria stepped out of it. Next demo, make one change and only one — after the dirt reveal, stop talking and ask Maria what she thinks of it.
10 Your last six demosFull report
Scores are only worth having if they move. Variant tracking is already in the engine — team_rollup breaks average score out by script variant.
| Script variant | Demos | Avg score | Close rate | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| A — features before price | 18 | 64 | 22% | Control |
| B — names ask before price | 12 | 71 | 31% | +9 pts |